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Post by DiscipleofBob on Jan 9, 2013 9:33:51 GMT -5
Getting this up now. This discussion thread can be used for First Class and All-Star X-Men.
The first issue for First Class should be up soon, and I plan for both to be out by the end of the month.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Jan 14, 2013 16:26:30 GMT -5
First issue for First Class is done and going through the editing process.
If anyone has time to give it a quick proofreading real quick, let me know.
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Post by jordan on Jan 14, 2013 18:42:44 GMT -5
I'm up for it.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Jan 15, 2013 12:07:08 GMT -5
Much obliged. First issue of First Class is up! Expect the first issue of All-Star X-Men to be out at the end of the month.
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Post by All Star Silentking on Jan 15, 2013 19:32:48 GMT -5
I enjoyed the issue very much. Everything about it was wonderful and I can't find any fault with it. 9/10 Sorry, but I don't know what else to say except that it is very good and that you write a good Cyclops. At least before he became an asshole in the comics.
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Post by Drake on Jan 16, 2013 19:39:05 GMT -5
Very, very good. No grammatical errors that I found. Your Scott is quite good, and I hope the story continues to focus on him (as I am a fan of Cyke, past and present, 616 and Ultimate). 9/10. Missing one just because it's not very fast paced, and just a little short.
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Post by randomfan on Jan 31, 2013 18:55:11 GMT -5
I really liked this issue, you gave a good view of Scott and what he was going through. I look forward to issue #1 and seeing the rest of the team.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Feb 1, 2013 10:25:50 GMT -5
I'm glad people like Scott, because there's going to be more of him in both lineups. ;D
Cyclops has always been my favorite Marvel character, barring the past storylines where writers just seem determined to screw him over. One of my goals is to really do the character justice.
Obviously All-Star X-Men 1 is up.
Expect some spoilers in there for First Class. Nothing you probably couldn't have guessed already.
Whereas First Class will focus primarily on Scott's point of view, ASX will jump around from character to character. A lot of people have stories to tell.
If there are spelling/grammar issues I apologize. I was a bit rushed to the end, and neither of my X-Titles are beta read by someone else, something I may very well change in the future.
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Post by jordan on Feb 9, 2013 1:03:37 GMT -5
Sorry, I was slow making my rounds of the #1's, work has gotten wonky as of late, by I did it! And I have to say...bravo.
Not as good as First Class, but still good. You're right, nothing I very well couldn't have guessed coming in the spoilers part, but nothing bad. Grammar mistakes weren't too bad, only detracting from the story maybe two or three times total.
Overall, not a bad start, one of the better #1's I've seen. I'm sorry about the rush at the end, but as I told randomfan in the Iron Man reviews, I'm always open to make extension requests and the such to ensure the best quality products come out at the end of the month. I don't hold extension requests against you unless it gets to be an astronomical number, like say, an extension to get January's issue out in the middle of April, then I might hold it against you.
But yeah, 7/10, not a bad start and I look forward to more.
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Post by All Star Silentking on Feb 9, 2013 19:50:33 GMT -5
I have to say that this was pretty good. Not as interesting when compared to your First Class story, but it is still enjoyable. It was a couple of days ago since I last read this so I don't remember if there were any mistakes. But if there were any, it is forgivable since you were a little rushed. I will have to say that this is a 7.5/10 since there wasn't anything that took me out of the story, but not much that made it memorable.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Feb 28, 2013 12:08:08 GMT -5
First Class Issue 1 is up.
My initial thoughts on this issue: It's short, much shorter than I'm used to. I've been trying to cut back on chapter length for both the sake of time and to make things easier to read, but I think I took a little too much off the top here. This was less due to the approaching deadline and more due to the fact that while I could start the next scene of Scott arriving at the Institute, that would take much longer than I wanted, so I decided it would be best to cover the flight over now.
Writing from the perspective of a blind person is definitely fun and challenging. There are cetain details you can't get into and other details you'd normally ignore but now have to emphasize.
All-Star X-Men will be much longer and out soon.
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Post by All Star Silentking on Feb 28, 2013 13:16:39 GMT -5
It was a short sweet issue that gives some insight on Scott's and Jean's characters and is a good way to established their relationship. Remember Bob, you can still make a story interesting even if there isn't much action in it and you certainly succeded here. 8.5/10
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Post by Drake on Feb 28, 2013 20:52:32 GMT -5
Very good issue. More insight into Scott and Jean. I'm loving the build up to their relationship. Shortness didn't matter for this one. 8.5/10.
I just gotta ask, was it implied in the story that Alex died in the car crash? I was just a bit confused there.
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Post by DiscipleofBob on Feb 28, 2013 21:10:23 GMT -5
Very good issue. More insight into Scott and Jean. I'm loving the build up to their relationship. Shortness didn't matter for this one. 8.5/10. I just gotta ask, was it implied in the story that Alex died in the car crash? I was just a bit confused there. It was implied, yes. It was not necessarily accurate.
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Post by Drake on Feb 28, 2013 21:53:02 GMT -5
That's what I figured lol.
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