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Post by ReadingTrance on Aug 7, 2013 12:21:03 GMT -5
After you beta read it, you said it was your favorite issue. Haha.
As for the perspective thing, I just wanted to try something different. Maybe it didn't work so well and could've been done better.
Star, I realize now that I used quickly a lot in that short span. I don't think I normally do that and I'm not sure what happened there.
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Post by Drake on Aug 7, 2013 13:43:05 GMT -5
Really? I don't know what changed. Maybe it's because I read it twice so it seemed more dull. I don't know. It's not bad at all, I just...I don't know what changed.
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Post by ReadingTrance on Sept 28, 2013 19:02:22 GMT -5
New Blade is up. Post your thoughts!
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Post by Drake on Oct 2, 2013 14:23:15 GMT -5
So, I beta read this issue, and I've been beta-ing the past few. And I've come to a conclusion. I'm enjoying them a lot less the second time. That's why a lot of my reviews tend to be less positive. The beta reading is screwing up my enjoyment of the series.
On to the topic at hand. The chapter was good. It was also very short, but there's no problem with that. I enjoyed it. Blade's slowly becoming more interesting. He's still the least interesting character, but he's improving. Nice job. 8/10
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Post by Stardrifter on Oct 8, 2013 18:56:35 GMT -5
It was all right. I didn't like how short it was and how it didn't progress the main plot at all. It should have flashed back to Blade and Van Helsing and at least had a short scene there before closing the issue. Otherwise this felt like a tangent that kills the main plots flow.
Otherwise it was well done. Some awkward phrasing but nothing horrible. Abraham wasn't as horrified as I would expect. But the fight was enjoyable. Keep em coming.
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Post by ReadingTrance on Oct 10, 2013 14:44:14 GMT -5
I have an announcement to make pertaining to my Blade series:
I have retracted issue #7. I was not happy with it. It didn't belong. I think you could tell just from reading it and I apologize for that.
With that being said, I am temporarily dropping Blade. This means it can be picked up by another author or I will return to it at a later date (I'm thinking 2-3 months). I just need a short break from it for now as I get another series running on here and work on a couple of personal stories.
Thank you for reading Blade. I appreciate the support and I promise that he will return at a later date.
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Post by All Star Silentking on Oct 10, 2013 14:50:54 GMT -5
Blade is officially, in continuity right? Even with issue 7, which admittedly isn't all that great, it still has 6 issues.
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